Great story! In the beginning I had some difficulty getting into the story because of the abbreviated writing style that was more reporting than engaging. But later the idea started to become visible (when the brother appeared for the first time) and from that point on the mystery was enough to sustain interest. Thanks!
Thanks for the feedback, Bay. I agree the beginning could be improved. I've been thinking of turning this story into a novel. I think it could make for a solid Zelazny-esque page-turner ;)
With the rise of deekfakes, it will be possible to copy anyone’s voice and make it seem like they’ve said horrible things.
Yeah, that's true. I keep forgetting about those. It's like my brain still refuses to accept it's a thing :o What a messed-up world we live in...
Great story! In the beginning I had some difficulty getting into the story because of the abbreviated writing style that was more reporting than engaging. But later the idea started to become visible (when the brother appeared for the first time) and from that point on the mystery was enough to sustain interest. Thanks!
Thanks for the feedback, Bay. I agree the beginning could be improved. I've been thinking of turning this story into a novel. I think it could make for a solid Zelazny-esque page-turner ;)
A strange, and intriguing take on good vs. evil, featuring a severe case of omnipotent sibling rivalry.
Glad you enjoyed it ;)