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Bay French's avatar

Great story! In the beginning I had some difficulty getting into the story because of the abbreviated writing style that was more reporting than engaging. But later the idea started to become visible (when the brother appeared for the first time) and from that point on the mystery was enough to sustain interest. Thanks!

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Tom Butcher's avatar

A strange, and intriguing take on good vs. evil, featuring a severe case of omnipotent sibling rivalry.

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