This method of writing gives the story a very dream-like feel. I'm not sure if it would work if the story was grounded in reality, but due to its fantastical nature I think it’s very fitting.
I agree. The other short story I wrote like this (the one in French) was actually set in a dream. And the mood pieces are... well, mood pieces, so those work well with this type of writing as well, since they're all about setting a mood.
I very much enjoyed the poetic nature of this story. Great job, Alex!
Thanks, Winston! Glad you liked it ;)
This method of writing gives the story a very dream-like feel. I'm not sure if it would work if the story was grounded in reality, but due to its fantastical nature I think it’s very fitting.
I agree. The other short story I wrote like this (the one in French) was actually set in a dream. And the mood pieces are... well, mood pieces, so those work well with this type of writing as well, since they're all about setting a mood.
I am uncertain of whether I liked the story or not. It was definitely different and left me feeling somewhat uneasy.
I can see how it might have that effect. Thank you for the comment!