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J.M. Ransom's avatar

You’ve created such an interesting world

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Alex S. Garcia's avatar

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it ;)

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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

You can make everyone immortal, but negative emotions are much harder to control.

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Alex S. Garcia's avatar

As long as humans remain humans, that will remain the ultimate challenge. I mean, I suppose science could find ways to mess with emotions, eventually, but wouldn't that just change us into something else?

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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

I think it would definitely change us into something else. Whether that's a good or bad change is a different question entirely.

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Great story! I love a good sci-fi/detective story, and this one reminds me of Asimov's Lije Bailey novels.

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Alex S. Garcia's avatar

Ooohh! Asimov! Thanks for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed the story ;)

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David Perlmutter's avatar

A society where murder is a thing of the past (until the inciting incident)?. We're not there yet in the real world, sadly.

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Alex S. Garcia's avatar

I'm not even sure we can ever get there at all, but who knows?

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