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Jan 1, 2023Liked by Alex S. Garcia

Oh this is such a cool challenge. I always wanted to work on something like this.

Happy new year!

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Well done.

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Aug 26, 2022Liked by Alex S. Garcia

I like the way this chapter takes place at the edge of time and that for a moment Joey actually watches time being created! It really brings the backstory of Joey and Crystal into play and yet still leaving so much unanswered. Nicely done!

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The teacup(s) have been explained! And dad's home! 😮

This was great! I enjoyed how you've circled us back around to it being a conversation between Joey and Crystal with the Hitchhiker's references and feels. And I love how the more I *want* to trust this Crystal variant, the less I feel I should. It really feels like the beginning of the end. I'm excited!

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Nice hook to read more. Great!

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Great twist! This story has so many layers.

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Great work, Alex. Thought I caught a whiff of Jedi there at the end. And three Joeys for the price of one! Eat your heart out Amazon!! 🎯

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Nice! And the allusions to Douglas Adams and Philip K. Dick are nice as well....

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NICE! I love this whole chapter including the relationship twists, the multiples, the hitchhiker’s references and the big surprise at the end. Well done all round!

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