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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

Even if that rock was just a rock, Mal made a huge mistake taking it home with her. It’s like trying to tempt the butterfly effect into action.

Good story. Chilling that the indexers possibly murdered a city of people unnecessarily.

Alex S. Garcia's avatar

It's not easy being a time traveler. Anything you do (or say) could have far-reaching consequences. You never know. Mal did make a mistake, I agree. Only Thyme will tell how bad a mistake it was ;)

Charles's avatar

Thank you.

Dan Blakely's avatar

Nice - I like the suspense around Djakka. And then that rock, Thyme, what's it's deal? Thanks for the quick read!

Alex S. Garcia's avatar

Thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed it ;)